If you are getting TIRED of this series just say so and I will stop with the first two chapters... If NOT... WARNING... there are THREE More to it. Just sayin...
Vacula the Vicious
Chapter 2.
I began sneezing, that VAC ATTRACT stuff had filled the air. I knew that it would soon filter down to the den. From there it was only a matter of time until IT would be awakened and start preparing to do its evil deeds.
I always try my best to keep mom from going down the steps. I don’t know why she finds the den so irresistible. The one thing I do know for sure is that once down there; Vacula will be ready and waiting for her. He will try to evade her grasp so that he can run about creating his own brand of havoc. I guess I should be thankful that mom does go after him. I just can’t stand the sight and sound of the struggle that is about to take place. It is classic. Good versus very much evil. I just live in fear that one day Vacula will be able to overpower my mom.
I watched from behind my ‘cliner chair as mom was drawn toward the steps. I shivered as I heard her foot hit the first step. The battle was about to begin. I wanted to yip and howl a warning. I wanted to whine and whimper and beg her not to go any closer. I just could not get the sounds to come. I could only shake and try to keep from peeing.
As the closet door screeched its way open, I began to bargain with the Keeper of Good Dachshunds. Please don’t let IT get me. I promise not to chew any more electric cords. I will never dig holes in the middle of the yard again. Keep IT in the closet and I will try not to steal socks. I will try to hold my barks inside. I will never again…
24 comments:
Oh Frankie I say MORE MORE MORE sucky stories please!! MOL MOL MOL
I don't like sucky monster either and you are so brave!!
Hugs Madi your BFFF
BOL BOL now we have the theme tune from JAWS in our heads. More please. Have a tremendous Thursday.
Best wishes Molly
We just finished attacking the "Big Greeny Vacula" that lives at our place....so we know just what you mean.
Imagine what I could do with an army of Vaculas!
Muhahaha!
*Intently reading story to see where he can find their lair.*
Oh no! We Beaglebratz just saw Evil Freddy'z comment - how ever can we stop him?
On a side note - yes, yes an'more yes - bring it on! We due want tue read more@
Shiloh'n Diva Shasta
My Mom had our suckingmachine out yesterday going over all the floors. She knows I hate it and asked me if I wanted to go outside. I thought "Who would help you if it would attack you when you are alone?" Not Zkhat thats for sure, she zooms upstairs!
Stella
This story is so suspenseful like a thriller
Lily & Edward
Keep it coming, I have to know how it ends!
Wow, I'm on the edge of my couch cushions waiting for the next piece of the story! BOL This dude is seriously scary.
Grr and Woof,
Sarge, Pol Comm
Frankie and Ernie I wish I could read your story but you know why I can not!!!
Frankie you say bring on the meat and hold the veggies---well every dog I have ever had has loved their veggies! Why did they love veggies---WHY???????
I don't know why but they did! But they did..........
You know Frankie, if you did chew more electric cords, might that that not be problem solved…
Just a thought.
Toodle pip!
Bertie.
this is just the bestest story please keep going.
stella rose
You left us hangin' again! That Vacula! Is there nothing to save it? Will it suck up your whole house...Alas Alack...Woe is you..
XXXOOo Bella & Roxy
What???? Is there a chapter three??? What Happened???? Did it suck you up and spit you out??? Did it suck up Ernie??? what is goin' on over theres????
Oh, BTW, I just sit in the middle of the floor and not move when Ma brings out the vacula...I say " just try it!! and it gets scared and moves along...
Just a tip! BOL
Kisses,
Ruby ♥
What???? Is there a chapter three??? What Happened???? Did it suck you up and spit you out??? Did it suck up Ernie??? what is goin' on over theres????
Oh, BTW, I just sit in the middle of the floor and not move when Ma brings out the vacula...I say " just try it!! and it gets scared and moves along...
Just a tip! BOL
Kisses,
Ruby ♥
We better get started at the front of the story. Oops!
Your Pals,
Murphy & Stanley
Ooooh Mr Frankie, what an exciting story. Well you know we're from Down Under here and a bit well, different don't ya? We actually laugh in the face of the vacula monster. Mum has to push us away with her foot when she uses it cause we DON'T get out of the way! Weird huh? We look forward to more of your story! No worries, and love, Stella and Rory
So did it work, Frankie???? We are dying to know. Funny thing, Lightning, who is afraid of a paper bag, has no fear of the vacula at all - just lies there and sleeps.
Woos - Phantom, Ciara, and Lightning
I took some pictues today that are drop dead beautiful!! Going to post them tomorrow and probably will again and again other times!! They are so pretty!!
Frankie you have us on the edge of our seats!
OMD!!!! Sammy is literally chewing his nails in anticipation of the next instalment!
Wally & Sammy
Fank youz for coming to my pawty and making my birthday so special. Wez away'z the weekend'z
so catch up'z wiff you Monday'z xxxxxx
Load'z of Hug'z
Mollie and Alfie
What a great story Frankie...we are so glad you didn't stop here!!
Smileys!
Dory, Jakey, Arty & Bilbo
Oly smoke Frankie my pal…i dunno if I haz da ka-ho-knees to reed dem uvver chapters….is skeery
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